[Functionality]
It works for me - However it is worth noting that this game isn't HEAVILY stat based like most other games and mostly plot armor and whatnot driving the story meaning if you for example have High Brutality and do a finesse check, you might die but of course you'll just get back up.
[Story]
I found the story and the characters to be quite enjoyable and interesting. It is a incredibly short story with but it does have a lot of dialogue choices and options still.
Length - It does not seem very long unlike many other stories so you're not reading 13 paragraphs to explain 1 simple questions.
RO - If that's your thing the story has quite a bit of them all with their own interests and personalities and are quite interesting in my opinion. However it is worth noting that depending on one of your earliest choices will affect who are available and who's not.
Overall - This story seems to be a funnel based introductory story meaning it will most likely have a second story coming up to continue where you left off and by funnel based I mean all paths converge into one point with the same ending. (with slight variations do not worry, your choices still matter.)