It feels that for a bit but the main character is broken, rusty and traumatized. The end of this release was where it was getting good, he just had surgery. Got new equipment, feels better and has his friends back.
When The Exile is completed, hopefully, there's no doubt it'll be one of the GOATS in the IF community. The demo is already S Tier in my book. Just my opinion though.
Really? If you read the entire demo, word for word you would understand completely why MC is powerless. The mother and wife broke them, took their power and exiled them but now at the end of Chapter five they redo the surgery and give them back their power. And not out of kindness but truly tho I hope we get the option to kill all who betrayed MC. It's a very dark story and I love it. Can't wait for Chapter 6.
Being weaker is one thing but the MC was a fighter, so they shouldn't be as helpless as they are in the story. look at like Tyson, he's old and most likely not like he used to be when he was young but i doubt many young people are whooping him now even in old age
Im not trying to be confrontational, I just want to help you understand. MC was the most ferocious warrior in the kingdom but that really stemmed from the power they had before they lost literally everything. Now while battling depression and suicidal thoughts their not in that same mindset before exile. It really does hurt you in more ways than one. But I believe in more chapters to come we'll start seeing MC like they were before.
I agree, my friend was a amateur boxer before he got a arm injury and he's not the same as before and when he lost his career/passion it almost broke him but by the gods he can still fight good even if he's not what he used to be
Same can be applied here, nevertheless I still love this demo, might become a Patreon. Just know they might be powerless and weak in the beginning and probably halfway through lmao they will find themselves again. Nothing will ever be the same but it'll get better. And I'm glad you're friend is doing good
You guys think their Patreon is worth it? I honestly think so because well The Exile is honestly one of my few favorite wips. I think I'm gonna go for it I do.
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