Need suggestions to make COG Story

[lordapple]

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[Mohsin]

You could add a holy templar or Knightley orders in this world which are named after major archangels and angels who wear blessed armors and holy weapons who protect the population and the church from supernatural elements which would mostly be populated by nobility or influential people since maintaining a warhorse knightly swords and weapons would be expensive, for names you can try like order of Saint Michael or camael

 

[hilise]

Rise of fanatics?
In times of despair?
A perfect setup for some conman/black wizard or something to manipulate the desperate masses, making it seem as if they are the savior/ holds the solution in their hands to save them from their mysery. A cult of fanatics is formed and something something happens. (fill in the blanks for yourself)

 

[Garm]

Evil options?
Like taking over/killing Lords.
Or capturing/taming enemies.

 

[ric.chaz]

I'm just throwing this out there. This is going to be free right? You are not going to publish at COG host game?

Because if you are, this would be the worst site to put this info on.

If not then forget what I said and keep going!

 

[lordapple]

Yes, I intend to do this for free when the story is completed. I am still learning to write a CYOA and don't know what to do.

 

[Vamp-kun]

You go have fun. Choicescript is hard, but after you master it, it becomes a blast!

 

[hilise]

You go have fun. Choicescript is hard, but after you master it, it becomes a blast!

Compared with other programming languages, it's the easiest one for beginners.

 

[Vamp-kun]

Of course. I forgot to clarify that it was in my case