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solavellan

solavellan

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have you ever played a game that made you want to smash a keyboard? read an IF which shoddy writing that made you question if the author bought their elementary school diploma? then this place is for you drop those scathing rap beats of hater criticism constructive or not because by the gods i am about to mc fu cking lose it betaing for god of chaos it's chapter 2 and im trying so hard to be graceful but god it is *** hopefully it gets better but i think not
 
there were a couple of new if's on cog that I gave the benefit of doubt just to regret. they seem like the fantasy of teenage boy who dreams of being the protagonist in a world they have too much difficult to write about. there is choices, just tap and tap of things that doesn't seem to make difference at all. a fanfic like you said. I will mention comedy romance of something I don't remember, just that it was in high school and the main character was preset to be a loser who got the attention of someone popular girl (¿) and the in between just because it show up to me a few minutes ago.
 
maybe this second one has changed with the years, but what I remember from my first try was a horrible thing that didn't make sense at all. not that everything must have one, but if you're going to sell a ideia saying it's a slice of life, the characters and their reasons must be at the least believable
 
I think that everyone can agree with me that Dao Ascension has probably the worst writing (typo wise) out there. As someone who speaks english like it's my primary language, even I have a hard time reading it, so I can only imagine how it must be for others who don't understand the language that well
 
I remember reading Shepherds of Haven and their God being addressed as Xir or some bullshit, and at first I thought it was the God's name, but then I remembered what community and space all those ifs partake in, and honestly I find it quite **** (same goes for that one mf from the "assassin desert town", the one where we meet Brioni)
 
Serpent said:
I remember reading Shepherds of Haven and their God being addressed as Xir or some bullshit, and at first I thought it was the God's name, but then I remembered what community and space all those ifs partake in, and honestly I find it quite **** (same goes for that one mf from the "assassin desert town", the one where we meet Brioni)
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Only cuz the God was being addressed as Xir? T_T dude what the f***
 
Man, What's in Stock (WIP) is a humongous pain in the arse to play. Who tf doesn't implement a save system in the year of our lord 2026?! And that's not to mention how certain choices keep breaking the game, and so I have to start all over again...

This hurts even more as I am a NASCAR fan (and a motorsports fan in general).
 
Serpent said:
Pretty much, yeah!😁:ROFLMAO: Along with whatever the **** that other mf is supposed to be, the one I mentioned in the brackets
Besides, I'm promoting haterism, aren't I:ROFLMAO: That's kind of my specialty!:ROFLMAO:
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Not to be a neopronounsphobic or whatever but like singular they/them has already existed in the English lexicon and never fell out of grammar town so putting a fictional god as a neopronounist is just wild lol as a thesis panelist in a creative writing once said "is there a narrative reason for that or did you just want to put one in the story?"
 
solavellan said:
Not to be a neopronounsphobic or whatever but like singular they/them has already existed in the English lexicon and never fell out of grammar town so putting a fictional god as a neopronounist is just wild lol as a thesis panelist in a creative writing once said "is there a narrative reason for that or did you just want to put one in the story?"
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Facts! And I'll gladly be neopronounsphobic, whatever that may mean, since this is the first time I'm seeing the word! :ROFLMAO:
All of that was done just to really drive in a point that they are very woke and very left extremist and that everyone should know that and be like them ffs☠️ Because there's literally no reason for that being a thing. Literally. Not a single reason for that **** being there. Just address God as God or whatever, if it pains you so much that people usually go with He when talking about God. Or just use the name, which I forgot, that's in the game, and address the said God by that. It's really not that hard😭
Though maybe, if I go to the author and say that that al is triggering me, would that change it? Because that's usually how they work, they just go bitching about stuff being offensive and triggering and whatever the **** else, so maybe that would work? Will have to try:hehe:
 
[/I can't remember the name but like there's one who you are the kid of Satan but you get punished by being sent to earth with amnesia and okay I can work with that, a pußßy ahh demon is fine but what it makes my **** and cüm boil is a scene

So picture this, you are the child of Satan, there's straight up the right hand of God after your aßß, you have a idiot who thinks you are a poor lost lamb (which you are and I'll explain in a little bit into why is stupid) , SO you may think you'll first move would be run away, like be already half way through USA? Well my dear friend that's not what happens, the idiot priest thought it would be a good fūcking idea to go into a amusement park and put in danger both the MC and themselves and guess what!? The ****ïng archangel Gabriel or Michael, I can't remember well •>•, shows up and fučk everyone up •<•

And my second point is that how being a amnesiac doesn't matter in the slightest if the amnesiac keeps acting just like they were before and the player not having a way to influence them, like mf at first isn't even capable of hurting a fly and you may think that now they lost they memory you can make them act more devilishly? But no every time you try the author invisible hand shows up and goes "Nah nah nah, this is a wholesome story and you won't do naughty stuff."

And for the coup de grâce when I wrote a comment on the game itch page rather of the author trying to justify on why the amusement park scene happened or to why the MC acts like that they just went "Wow complaining on a free game?" Or some shït which like mf free or not aßßholes will exist that'll give criticize to your **** 0<0 not just because is free you are absolved of criticism lil bro 🥀🥀🥀🥀]
 
AwooChan said:
I'm unfortunately morbidly curious and I need to see how bad these are 😭
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2 of them don't even have demos yet lmao, and I've already read Ink and Locria's stuff. Locria's stuff is genuinely somewhat nausea inducing but has some decent writing, and Ink's wips don't actually have a lot of content but the writing is also decent. Both Locria and Ink have like 5 different wips and they all have almost zero substance atm lmao
 
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