Stories that left you disappointed for a reason

[Serpent]

Yeah, I could sort of forgive it for cheaper Patreons, but for pricier ones, like Wayfarer? The EA tier costs like an indie game on steam, and the access is not even permanent.

Money hungry dogs, but honestly, I can't even blame them for doing it. It's the people that pay for it and don't say a damn about it that are the actual problem.
Otherwise, if people were normal, they wouldn't be able to do that ****

 

[yourstalkeroutside]

Yeah, I could sort of forgive it for cheaper Patreons, but for pricier ones, like Wayfarer? The EA tier costs like an indie game on steam, and the access is not even permanent

Good thing it isn't regularly updated + there's really nothing extra to keep paying for it. Still crap but slightly less crap than if it was regularly updated with a bunch of short stories and lore locked behind a paywall. Or like GBPatch who puts dead projects that they don't ever plan on finishing or releasing behind a patreon paywall because it isn't 'polished' enough to release it for free but good enough for $15 a month.

 

[Serpent]

Just played new chapter of Infamous, just so I can hook up with Gina, let's be real, and I have a few things to say.
First would be a huuuuge amount of typos and errors in general. Like when a character is supposed to say something, but there's just blank space, stuff like that.
Second, code or variables, it's all ****ed. Though it may just be Amy not giving a **** about following it and writing things she sees fit, but I swear to everything, I haven't chosen a single ****ing romance option with August, Orion OR Sebastian, and I still get text like, "August is looking real good tonight", or "Orion looks at you two with narrowed eyes", or my personal favorite considering I interacted with Sebastian for the whole 4 minutes throughout the whole game, "Sebastian looks disappointed but masks it quickly"... Like common, wtf even is all that? My mc cares only about Gina, and Seven here and there, but that's about it. What the **** are those descriptions then??????
Also, the "you're not sober enough" options are pure bullshit. They are buggy, along with some other variables, so yeah, greying them out because of some strange failed variable check is just plain retarded. My mc is a ****ing diva, and he doesn't enjoy the attention for some reason or the other, when he is ushered to his stall or booth or whatever. Insane.
All in all, in conclusion, Amy needs beta readers asap, and also Sebastian needs to be cut off. Everyone and everything else is alright for now

 

[Vanya]

Like when a character is supposed to say something, but there's just blank space, stuff like that.

Yes!! It got really confusing sometimes especially when it's supposed to say a name or whatever. Or that moment where G calls us a nickname after he sends us home after we hook up, and omg, I need to know what he called us because I'm too invested in his romance.

I haven't chosen a single ****ing romance option with August, Orion OR Sebastian, and I still get text like, "August is looking real good tonight", or "Orion looks at you two with narrowed eyes", or my personal favorite considering I interacted with Sebastian for the whole 4 minutes throughout the whole game, "Sebastian looks disappointed but masks it quickly"... Like common, wtf even is all that?

Same, it's so annoying! I really thought I chose a romance option by mistake or something. And the worst thing is I really avoid Sebastian on every occasion and he still gets pushed no matter what! I can't even understand why he's a full RO when Blake or Dakota are so much more interesting. He's just so boring and adds nothing to the story, he's just there because his daughter (who's annoying as hell!) wants to follow MC everywhere!

Also, what's up with MC being pushed to be Victoria's buddy??? No matter how much I try to avoid her or how much I'm rude to her, I'm still forced to be friendly to her and interact with her (at least Amy let us refuse to meet up with her last chapter, which was exactly what I did!) My MC doesn't really care about her or her problems, he doesn't care about her movie or how unhappy she is, he just wants her to leave so he can steal her husband!! And no, no matter how much Amy tries to guilt trip my MC for feeling attracted to G and flirting with him, that's not gonna happen, my boy couldn't care less about Victoria and their fake, loveless marriage, I'm pretty sure he could make G a lot more happier anyway!! hehe~~~