This isn't really a criticism since I liked it enough to play twice, but Perfumare Avulsion is like meh compared to the VN version. It's still worth reading but the story was, imo, clunky, I was just skipping away at parts and no not because i already knew what was gonna happen (no one ask me how many times i read shepherds of haven).
Like we didn't need all the training/past stuff who caresss, I much preferred the vn confessions too, a lot more dramatic, and the ending was so nicely wrapped up. The art really set the setting. Something to think about if you're between making a vn or if....longer and wordier doesn't necessarily mean better and the art doesn't have to be perfect to complete the story