Rewrite: Remnants of The Past (Act 1)
A/N: The rewrites are finally here! Since the start of the year, I’ve been slowly rewriting the entire Act to improve the writing overall and tweak a few scenes. With the end of Act 2 coming so soon, I powered through and finally finished it!
There are no major changes to the main story. This has been more of a massive edit than full rewrite. The first half, especially, has been edited the most.
Features:
- Improved writing in general.
- Adjusted the atmosphere and certain details to better fit a medieval setting, since before it could get a bit confusing in some scenes.
- Toned down the swearing, especially for the MC. I got feedback saying it felt a bit too much, and after revisiting it, I agreed. I also replaced some words with ones more fitting for the setting.
- Added new dialogue options.
- Added new scenes.
- Added new variables for MC's gender and pronouns to clean up the code. Before it was made with if statements.
- Tweaked some existing variables and scenes.
- Updated the codex and added an entry for the MC.
- In MC's codex entry, there are also some notes written by the MC about their love interest if they have it.
Some variables have already been added to Act 2 to avoid save issues, but there’s still a chance a few might not display properly. Because of that, I recommend replaying Act 1 even if you've already finished it just to make sure everything imports smoothly into Act 2.
For those playing on mobile, I still can't find a solution for the audio on the APK. I believe it has something to do with the files being too heavy, but I can't compress them enough for the audio to work properly. I'll keep trying to find a solution, but until then I'm afraid the APK will continue without background music.
A/N: The rewrites are finally here! Since the start of the year, I’ve been slowly rewriting the entire Act to improve the writing overall and tweak a few scenes. With the end of Act 2 coming so soon, I powered through and finally finished it!
There are no major changes to the main story. This has been more of a massive edit than full rewrite. The first half, especially, has been edited the most.
Features:
- Improved writing in general.
- Adjusted the atmosphere and certain details to better fit a medieval setting, since before it could get a bit confusing in some scenes.
- Toned down the swearing, especially for the MC. I got feedback saying it felt a bit too much, and after revisiting it, I agreed. I also replaced some words with ones more fitting for the setting.
- Added new dialogue options.
- Added new scenes.
- Added new variables for MC's gender and pronouns to clean up the code. Before it was made with if statements.
- Tweaked some existing variables and scenes.
- Updated the codex and added an entry for the MC.
- In MC's codex entry, there are also some notes written by the MC about their love interest if they have it.
Some variables have already been added to Act 2 to avoid save issues, but there’s still a chance a few might not display properly. Because of that, I recommend replaying Act 1 even if you've already finished it just to make sure everything imports smoothly into Act 2.
For those playing on mobile, I still can't find a solution for the audio on the APK. I believe it has something to do with the files being too heavy, but I can't compress them enough for the audio to work properly. I'll keep trying to find a solution, but until then I'm afraid the APK will continue without background music.
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