Stories that left you disappointed for a reason

[Gone_Dead]

Okay i just checked out Dawn of Heroes cuz i all of a sudden got a superhero itch. Wtf is even going on? Why does the author feels the need to unironically describe every single action taken by every single character poetically? Say a character farts, then the author would describe it as "He gritted his teeth as gas escapes the narrow pathway of his intestine like air escaping a released balloon." seriously wtf. Also, the characters and the MC are one dimensional and their interactions are so corny. The pacing is so random and the plot points seem so forced. It doesnt flow naturally. I was excited when i was customizing MC's powers but MC doesnt even use them properly. Even if your stats are way better than other heroes, you at times just watch things happen like a moron as the other heroes save the day. Still i forced myself to finish 7 chapters so far and i still havent felt pulled in. Idk how many more chs are left and i doubt its going to get better now, but ill finish the WIP anyway. I noticed that the IF releases in April, maybe the author rewrote a large part of it? I really like the power system they implemented but everything surrounding it is just not it.