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Yeah, I could sort of forgive it for cheaper Patreons, but for pricier ones, like Wayfarer? The EA tier costs like an indie game on steam, and the access is not even permanent
Good thing it isn't regularly updated + there's really nothing extra to keep paying for it. Still crap but slightly less crap than if it was regularly updated with a bunch of short stories and lore locked behind a paywall. Or like GBPatch who puts dead projects that they don't ever plan on finishing or releasing behind a patreon paywall because it isn't 'polished' enough to release it for free but good enough for $15 a month.
 
Just played new chapter of Infamous, just so I can hook up with Gina, let's be real, and I have a few things to say.
First would be a huuuuge amount of typos and errors in general. Like when a character is supposed to say something, but there's just blank space, stuff like that.
Second, code or variables, it's all ****ed. Though it may just be Amy not giving a **** about following it and writing things she sees fit, but I swear to everything, I haven't chosen a single ****ing romance option with August, Orion OR Sebastian, and I still get text like, "August is looking real good tonight", or "Orion looks at you two with narrowed eyes", or my personal favorite considering I interacted with Sebastian for the whole 4 minutes throughout the whole game, "Sebastian looks disappointed but masks it quickly"... Like common, wtf even is all that? My mc cares only about Gina, and Seven here and there, but that's about it. What the **** are those descriptions then??????
Also, the "you're not sober enough" options are pure bullshit. They are buggy, along with some other variables, so yeah, greying them out because of some strange failed variable check is just plain retarded. My mc is a ****ing diva, and he doesn't enjoy the attention for some reason or the other, when he is ushered to his stall or booth or whatever. Insane.
All in all, in conclusion, Amy needs beta readers asap, and also Sebastian needs to be cut off. Everyone and everything else is alright for now
 
Like when a character is supposed to say something, but there's just blank space, stuff like that.
Yes!! It got really confusing sometimes especially when it's supposed to say a name or whatever. Or that moment where G calls us a nickname after he sends us home after we hook up, and omg, I need to know what he called us because I'm too invested in his romance.

I haven't chosen a single ****ing romance option with August, Orion OR Sebastian, and I still get text like, "August is looking real good tonight", or "Orion looks at you two with narrowed eyes", or my personal favorite considering I interacted with Sebastian for the whole 4 minutes throughout the whole game, "Sebastian looks disappointed but masks it quickly"... Like common, wtf even is all that?
Same, it's so annoying! I really thought I chose a romance option by mistake or something. And the worst thing is I really avoid Sebastian on every occasion and he still gets pushed no matter what! I can't even understand why he's a full RO when Blake or Dakota are so much more interesting. He's just so boring and adds nothing to the story, he's just there because his daughter (who's annoying as hell!) wants to follow MC everywhere!

Also, what's up with MC being pushed to be Victoria's buddy??? No matter how much I try to avoid her or how much I'm rude to her, I'm still forced to be friendly to her and interact with her (at least Amy let us refuse to meet up with her last chapter, which was exactly what I did!) My MC doesn't really care about her or her problems, he doesn't care about her movie or how unhappy she is, he just wants her to leave so he can steal her husband!! And no, no matter how much Amy tries to guilt trip my MC for feeling attracted to G and flirting with him, that's not gonna happen, my boy couldn't care less about Victoria and their fake, loveless marriage, I'm pretty sure he could make G a lot more happier anyway!! hehe~~~
 
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Also, what's up with MC being pushed to be Victoria's buddy??? No matter how much I try to avoid her or how much I'm rude to her, I'm still forced to be friendly to her and interact with her (at least Amy let us refuse to meet up with her last chapter, which was exactly what I did!) My MC doesn't really care about her or her problems, he doesn't care about her movie or how unhappy she is, he just wants her to leave so he can steal her husband!!
Meanwhile one of my MCs: so if I befriend Vic and motivate her to become an independent actress, I can steal her infantile hot husband with minimal scandal 🧐 Poor G getting another red flag person in his life aka my MC. But also: seeing G's family and circle I understand how Victoria had all her joy sucked out of her.

and their fake, loveless marriage
Is their marriage fake fake? I got an impression that they do care for one another genuinely, but because they are both pushovers and people-pleasers, it deteriorated.
 
Is their marriage fake fake? I got an impression that they do care for one another genuinely, but because they are both pushovers and people-pleasers, it deteriorated.
I got the feeling that at the beggining they actually cared for each other but now it's just a fake marriage because their couple sells and makes G look good or something like that. Vic is always upset with G anyway (which sometimes I can actually understand). But you're right, because if I can remember right Amy said if you play their poly you can make them remember why they fell in love in the first place. Ahh, their poly seems so awkward to me, I can't even understand it and G seems the jealous, possessive type anyway (especially if you flirt with Dakota in front of him or if you give your number to that dude who won last year's BOTB) so nope, can't understand it.

G's family is the worst, but watching him take care of his sister made me like him even more. This chapter made it for me, my MC was actually torn between him and Orion (I need to make another MC to romance him), but now that's it, G is the only one for him. Also the hook up scene was actually pretty hot and a lot nicer than I thought it would be (too bad how it ended though :cautious:).
 
Yes!! It got really confusing sometimes especially when it's supposed to say a name or whatever. Or that moment where G calls us a nickname after he sends us home after we hook up, and omg, I need to know what he called us because I'm too invested in his romance.


Same, it's so annoying! I really thought I chose a romance option by mistake or something. And the worst thing is I really avoid Sebastian on every occasion and he still gets pushed no matter what! I can't even understand why he's a full RO when Blake or Dakota are so much more interesting. He's just so boring and adds nothing to the story, he's just there because his daughter (who's annoying as hell!) wants to follow MC everywhere!

Also, what's up with MC being pushed to be Victoria's buddy??? No matter how much I try to avoid her or how much I'm rude to her, I'm still forced to be friendly to her and interact with her (at least Amy let us refuse to meet up with her last chapter, which was exactly what I did!) My MC doesn't really care about her or her problems, he doesn't care about her movie or how unhappy she is, he just wants her to leave so he can steal her husband!! And no, no matter how much Amy tries to guilt trip my MC for feeling attracted to G and flirting with him, that's not gonna happen, my boy couldn't care less about Victoria and their fake, loveless marriage, I'm pretty sure he could make G a lot more happier anyway!! hehe~~~
I think G just calls you a Chosen One, though I can't quite recall now, I'm sorry 😭 But yeah, it is so annoying, especially when some other character, like Blake or someone, says something, and it's just blank spaces, so I have to do some ****ing Sherlock Holmes work to deduce what may have been said, judging by how my MC responds or something.

And for real, Blake and Dakota are both cool as hell, but Sebastian is there to be pushed to all hell, like common, I don't give two shits about him or Maya. Like sure, she is a super fan, and I'm cool with my fans, but that's about it. I don't need them constantly with me, but nah, if you decide to be a relatively decent human being to any of them, I think that counts as some invisible romance point? That's my only guess, since I know for a fact that I haven't chosen a single romance option. But who knows atp😭
Is their marriage fake fake?
I mean it definitely did start as one, as was said in some part of the story, how it was a PR thing. But honestly, you just need to take one look at them and see that they are not compatible at all. Sure, they may have grown fond of each other along the way, but not to any insane degree, especially when G says that she (in my chosen preference), was more worried about me than Vic, when we were sent to Victor for scolding.
So yeah, I think it's safe to assume that it's a fake marriage by all accounts, and a bad one at that
 
the dad RO reminds me of this Pic, so irrelevant nd so insignificant. i burst out laughing everytime I see the option of thinking abt him or looking for him in the crowd because he's so out of place in this entire game, like I only saw u three times throughout it all.
Just wasting space istg
the photographer RO isn’t much better. Amy keeps wasting time on these irrelevant ROs that nobody really likes, i don’t even remember the name of one of them. Instead of forcing these awkward scenes, she could be putting that energy into the popular ROs that fans actually care about.
 
the photographer RO isn’t much better. Amy keeps wasting time on these irrelevant ROs that nobody really likes, i don’t even remember the name of one of them. Instead of forcing these awkward scenes, she could be putting that energy into the popular ROs that fans actually care about.
****, I almost forgot about Eleanor :ROFLMAO: Says a lot, but yeah, she's in the same boat as Sebastian. I swear, why the **** was she disappointed when I barely talked to her, and have then refused to keep her company while she went around to take photos? Like, hello? I've got stuff to do bich, I ain't got time to waltz around with your ***, I got a competition to win, and a marriage to break, like common:ROFLMAO:😭
 
Also the hook up scene was actually pretty hot and a lot nicer than I thought it would be
G asking MC to tell them they are not rotten for cheating on their spouse made me cackle real loud. They want an enabler partner so badly because the moment the MC shows a single ounce of regret\hesitation they freak out, yet if you play it cool they mirror it perfectly. But the scene was hot, I'll give Amy that.

G's family is the worst
I laughed at the final of the whole dinner scene because G approves if you ditch the meeting midway, but if later you ask them smth like 'so have I impressed you', they do a 180 and say 'nope, that's still my mom we are talking about' and their approval drops. Honey, you have been telegraphing that you hate your mom for the whole chapter?? But, hey, you know what? My MC might be getting awful in-laws, but G also will get awful ones!

the photographer RO isn’t much better. Amy keeps wasting time on these irrelevant ROs that nobody really likes, i don’t even remember the name of one of them. Instead of forcing these awkward scenes, she could be putting that energy into the popular ROs that fans actually care about.
Almost every interaction with E I keep expecting to learn down the line that E is some super creepy stalker who has a shrine to the MC made out of MC's hair and nail clippings.I will be very disappointed if they are normal.
 
G asking MC to tell them they are not rotten for cheating on their spouse made me cackle real loud. They want an enabler partner so badly because the moment the MC shows a single ounce of regret\hesitation they freak out, yet if you play it cool they mirror it perfectly. But the scene was hot, I'll give Amy that.
I'LL GIVE HER THAT. Compliment where compliment is due, but I swear to everything, Victoria's timing is punishable by death, so she better watch the **** out :ROFLMAO:
Almost every interaction with E I keep expecting to learn down the line that E is some super creepy stalker who has a shrine to the MC made out of MC's hair and nail clippings.I will be very disappointed if they are normal.
That would actually be a cool little sideplot ngl😂
 
the photographer RO isn’t much better. Amy keeps wasting time on these irrelevant ROs that nobody really likes, i don’t even remember the name of one of them. Instead of forcing these awkward scenes, she could be putting that energy into the popular ROs that fans actually care about.
tbh, authors should stop with the entire "normal ROs" that stand like a sore thumb in the environment that the plot is taking place in. nobody wants to romance a damn dad nd a photographer in an IF centered around song making, celebrities, drama. it just dumps down the mood nd creates clutter that forces us to pay attention to characters that provide zero service to the transpiring events.
Blake is literally the character that kept on both opposing nd challenging us since the beginning, the one who has got us into this mess of being perceived as alleged cheaters, yet he's demoted to a secondary RO that has a probably bad fixed ending? how does that make any damn sense.
 
tbh, authors should stop with the entire "normal ROs" that stand like a sore thumb in the environment that the plot is taking place in. nobody wants to romance a damn dad nd a photographer in an IF centered around song making, celebrities, drama. it just dumps down the mood nd creates clutter that forces us to pay attention to characters that provide zero service to the transpiring events.
Blake is literally the character that kept on both opposing nd challenging us since the beginning, the one who has got us into this mess of being perceived as alleged cheaters, yet he's demoted to a secondary RO that has a probably bad fixed ending? how does that make any damn sense.
Same goes for Dakota. She's there, with a unique vibe and plot around her, unlike the "normal" people. As you said, why in the **** would I choose a ****ing regular *** gamer dad, or a photographer stalker who just happens to be there??? Bs like a mf 😂
 
Almost every interaction with E I keep expecting to learn down the line that E is some super creepy stalker who has a shrine to the MC made out of MC's hair and nail clippings.I will be very disappointed if they are normal.
I recall tumblr posts alluding to E being...complex? It was cryptic and the post seemed to be negative. I just find them boring for now and doubt they'll ever be as interesting as Dakota.
 
Almost every interaction with E I keep expecting to learn down the line that E is some super creepy stalker who has a shrine to the MC made out of MC's hair and nail clippings.I will be very disappointed if they are normal.

Tbf you might not be that far off lmao, I have suspected from the beginning that E is either some sort of paparazzi/journalist or whatever working for a tabloid, sth like that. They're really sus lol, not only did they conveniently replace the previous photographer assigned for the MC's band (if I remember correctly) but they also somehow managed to show up when the MC was lost when walking back from somewhere, I think in the first city the show was in? Sorry it's been a while since I played so I've forgotten a lot of the details. But yeah I feel like they have something shady going on... but tbh even with that, they'd still be boring to me 🤷‍♀️
 
Tbf you might not be that far off lmao, I have suspected from the beginning that E is either some sort of paparazzi/journalist or whatever working for a tabloid, sth like that. They're really sus lol, not only did they conveniently replace the previous photographer assigned for the MC's band (if I remember correctly) but they also somehow managed to show up when the MC was lost when walking back from somewhere, I think in the first city the show was in? Sorry it's been a while since I played so I've forgotten a lot of the details. But yeah I feel like they have something shady going on... but tbh even with that, they'd still be boring to me 🤷‍♀️
Yeah, when they were in nyc and all that, but even if they are a ****ing stalker, who in their right mind would choose that over G or Seven or Blake or Dakota or O????????? Those ones are million times better imo
 
I'm very happy for CC Hill to have finally submitted WLGYL. The rewrite helped a lot in that her original writing was fragmented, hard to read and not written to my tastes. That being said, I didn't like WLGYL and I doubt reading the last few chapters will change that. She's just not an author for me. Her main appeal is her smut, and her smut isn't written well to me. It reminds me of those romance books which would be just okay without any smut but with smut they become awkward to read due to how the scenes are written.
 
Tbf you might not be that far off lmao, I have suspected from the beginning that E is either some sort of paparazzi/journalist or whatever working for a tabloid, sth like that. They're really sus lol, not only did they conveniently replace the previous photographer assigned for the MC's band (if I remember correctly) but they also somehow managed to show up when the MC was lost when walking back from somewhere, I think in the first city the show was in? Sorry it's been a while since I played so I've forgotten a lot of the details. But yeah I feel like they have something shady going on... but tbh even with that, they'd still be boring to me 🤷‍♀️
Yeah, you remember correctly. Also if you hook up with Dakota on a plane E is just... Conveniently happens to be standing outside the bathroom where you do the deed. Not creepy at all, move along.

My two theories is that E is either a journalist digging into the whole mistreatment scandal or MC's stalker fan.
 
Yeah, you remember correctly. Also if you hook up with Dakota on a plane E is just... Conveniently happens to be standing outside the bathroom where you do the deed. Not creepy at all, move along.

My two theories is that E is either a journalist digging into the whole mistreatment scandal or MC's stalker fan.
Does E possibly have a hidden recording device and or have their camera running during that scene?
 
Does E possibly have a hidden recording device and or have their camera running during that scene?
If I remember correctly, there was nothing about it in the game, but during the whole thing with Dakota MC notes that Dakota is pretty vocal to the point that MC gets nervous that someone would hear. So imagine coming out of that bathroom and seeing someone right there. I cannot think of a single non-creepy reason someone would stand that close when it's obvious what is going on inside. Like either E is being creepy or they are recording, imo. Or both.
 
If I remember correctly, there was nothing about it in the game, but during the whole thing with Dakota MC notes that Dakota is pretty vocal to the point that MC gets nervous that someone would hear. So imagine coming out of that bathroom and seeing someone right there. I cannot think of a single non-creepy reason someone would stand that close when it's obvious what is going on inside. Like either E is being creepy or they are recording, imo. Or both.
Very interesting, Dakota. lmao. I need to replay their scenes. Dakota doesn't want G to know but loves to take risks and is a bit prideful about MC. If I'm recalling correctly Dakota seems to be more controlled compared to MC...so am I right and Dakota was playing it up a bit for fun to see if they'll get caught?
It will never happen (sadly) but I wish we will eventually get a POV later on of Dakota's thoughts in general but especially that scene.

Yeah, I'm not putting anything past E for now. I know that regardless of whether it was recorded or not E knows and E is untrustworthy.
 
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