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Path of martial arts: leaked sneak peaks, and discussing thread

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Just read dao ascension took me 5-6 hrs, other author should really take notes on how to maintain continuity while juggling sub plots and variety ao that it doesn't get monotonous story telling is A+ here i am sure if author wanted stats check could have easily integrated here cause its just that good even if written story is not stat check dependent but plot doesn't allow till now so no visible stats apart from personality bars are there in stat menu

Character/NPC introduction very good does not feel forced at all really natural. Mixes well with what the background moment and story/premise unique background story as well i am a lazy reader but npc really are that distinct that i remember each of them although at core i am still a lazy reader so li xyz li abc still sometimes confuses me but it just me any reader having attention span more than goldfish can pay attention remember them

Feels like one punch man but not exactly like that story makes your mc feel powerful but its not bland and repetitive every occasion mc uses its powers has impact and feels attached and connected to other events in the story and reader always get the feeling this action will benefit my mc in future and it shows in some scenarios as well eg - buying your friends weapons at auction, completing their martial technique or curing them of disease

Also you feel no less than jesus while curing blindness of others

Ending fight with with nascent bad guy was good

Has wider scope of replayability cause each offers value and provide unique info that other option doesn't if at all they lead to same consequences

One example i would like to highlight is flexibility and humaness of interaction - Your mc tells elder that they wont spill some secret about what they saw and assuage their fears but as soon as he gets out immediately tells his friends cause that option is given to players but mc friends or npc are mature enough to keep what mc has told them a secret its the best possible outcome cause in this scenario you told truth to the people that were getting impacted by withholding the info and they were mature enough to keep that thing a secret
 
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Shadow said:
Sorry but i am confused i have read theories here that zombie bro is just a vessel controlled by entity that does not belong from this world i also read that moon guy also is a puppet from gods can you please clear my confusion around this

Now i am reading that zombie bro himself has a technique that allows him to control others 😬 in poma our mc is always a bottom getting bottomed although this mu chen fight raised our bottom a little bit like a butt lift
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Basically yuan fang always was a dude who was being controlled by someone else since the first time we met him or atleast it has been for sometime and now that person is taking He gang's body who he has beef with.
The body snatcher being a Cultivator isn't in known for now and he is the new Femmc ro and he will take over He gang so I think y'all get it the rumour about he gang becoming ro was because of this body snatcher becoming a ro and taking He gang's body.

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Gone_Dead said:
How is Dao Ascension compared to poma and AC? I havent played it but i keep hearing mixed opinions.
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You should wait till the rewrite that will completed in December or January it will have mistakes fixed and more events added to flesh out characters more rn it is rough draft because dev was trying to get updates of 18k words weekly.
 
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I must’ve read the wrong story because… that reminds me of bad MTLs I used to read as a teen lol… like stuff just happens and feels forgotten next page. Feels like I was jumping to one event after another, with no connection. But I’m a snob when it comes to this genre.
 
Kro said:
Oh yeah i forgot that that's a possibility. All the more reason to avoid fighting he gang. For now at least
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I don't understand thuis
If wanted body then why not someone stronger like mc and ruo or someone on higher level?
Why he wants he gang's body exactly?
 
God said:
Not at all, both have better stories, but It does feel like the more Novel feeling. Like MC is OP from the start, if it was more coherent, and connected would be able to compete. Plus MC being a kid doing all this weirds me out tbh
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There was a reason for it the earlier part of the story is directly from a novel he was writing it was going to be a web novel originally that is also why he is doing this rewrite to make earlier events have more IF feeling.The later events have that.As for the kid thing well once he is done with fixing the old stuff and adding more there will be the first time skip which will make the mc being around 15 and then have an arc or two there before mc gets another timeskip where he finally is 18.
 
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Diamondhead said:
As for the kid thing well once he is done with fixing the old stuff and adding more there will be the first time skip which will make the mc being around 15 and then have an arc or two there before mc gets another timeskip where he finally is 18.
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Hopefully the timeskip will be added before joining the sect, I felt second hand embarassment imagining a 10-11 year old child doing all the possible stuff or the way they larping like they're an adult in that story so far. Felt so dissonant and cringe🤦🏽‍♂️
 
sevyrex said:
Hopefully the timeskip will be added before joining the sect, I felt second hand embarassment imagining a 10-11 year old child doing all the possible stuff or the way they larping like they're an adult in that story so far. Felt so dissonant and cringe🤦🏽‍♂️
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Nah bro you will be in sect as a 10 year old timeskip is for later where the story ended rn after that there will be a timeskip and isn't it obvious why he behaves like an adult?he has lived with Ruolan and her mother most of his life Ruolan is 6 years older than Mc he didn't really play with kids or his peers till he got to the sect it is also why earlier parts will get more variations as he fixes some dialogues in the way of mc talking ,like him being a disrespectful kid which mc does a lot without input at the earlier parts of the story,it will be fixed and will only happen if you choose it,then playing as Stoic will be possible later events already have it ,and finally having options of be like a graceful noble behaviour this is also present in later Events.Once again his behaviour makes sense to me as he didn't have people the same age him to spend time with plus again the mc has all the power in the world so yeah he cannot ever be normal child anyways . Setting has genius children even younger than mc becoming Cultivatiors only at the starting stage other settings have that too even niki verse have 10 year old qi sea geniuses in Worlds outside poma.But yeah you will be able to control how he talks and personality but he will be behaving close to an adult because of how he has lived and because of his very nature.

So gonna wait till December or January when he updates the game with the fixed version
 
sevyrex said:
Hopefully the timeskip will be added before joining the sect, I felt second hand embarassment imagining a 10-11 year old child doing all the possible stuff or the way they larping like they're an adult in that story so far. Felt so dissonant and cringe🤦🏽‍♂️
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Was MC even 10 or 11 lmao I couldn’t do it tbh, trying way too hard. Nothing changes making MC a teen at least.
 
Diamondhead said:
Nah bro you will be in sect as a 10 year old timeskip is for later where the story ended rn after that there will be a timeskip and isn't it obvious why he behaves like an adult?he has lived with Ruolan and her mother most of his life Ruolan is 6 years older than Mc he didn't really play with kids or his peers till he got to the sect it is also why earlier parts will get more variations as he fixes some dialogues in the way of mc talking ,like him being a disrespectful kid which mc does a lot without input at the earlier parts of the story,it will be fixed and will only happen if you choose it,then playing as Stoic will be possible later events already have it ,and finally having options of be like a graceful noble behaviour this is also present in later Events.Once again his behaviour makes sense to me as he didn't have people the same age him to spend time with plus again the mc has all the power in the world so yeah he cannot ever be normal child anyways . Setting has genius children even younger than mc becoming Cultivatiors only at the starting stage other settings have that too even niki verse have 10 year old qi sea geniuses in Worlds outside poma.But yeah you will be able to control how he talks and personality but he will be behaving close to an adult because of how he has lived and because of his very nature.

So gonna wait till December or January when he updates the game with the fixed version
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Not reading all that honestly, that mid is not good enough to be going ham like this for it. Well I’m done talking about it lol.
 
Diamondhead said:
Nah bro you will be in sect as a 10 year old timeskip is for later where the story ended rn after that there will be a timeskip and isn't it obvious why he behaves like an adult?he has lived with Ruolan and her mother most of his life Ruolan is 6 years older than Mc he didn't really play with kids or his peers till he got to the sect it is also why earlier parts will get more variations as he fixes some dialogues in the way of mc talking ,like him being a disrespectful kid which mc does a lot without input at the earlier parts of the story,it will be fixed and will only happen if you choose it,then playing as Stoic will be possible later events already have it ,and finally having options of be like a graceful noble behaviour this is also present in later Events.Once again his behaviour makes sense to me as he didn't have people the same age him to spend time with plus again the mc has all the power in the world so yeah he cannot ever be normal child anyways . Setting has genius children even younger than mc becoming Cultivatiors only at the starting stage other settings have that too even niki verse have 10 year old qi sea geniuses in Worlds outside poma.But yeah you will be able to control how he talks and personality but he will be behaving close to an adult because of how he has lived and because of his very nature.

So gonna wait till December or January when he updates the game with the fixed version
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Well, here's hoping the fix will make the early part much less obnoxious. Especially the side characters since we can't control them.
 
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