Yall should just write an IF, cause with the amount of words I'm seeing 10k words per hour doesn't seem too far fetched
COM Collab Cultivation gameYall should just write an IF, cause with the amount of words I'm seeing 10k words per hour doesn't seem too far fetched
No joke, I am writing one lol. It's at about 100k~. That's actually why I do comment about stats and variability so much, since I myself am trying to find a way to make it as variable as possible without making it too long. Can't say I'm succeeding though, since those 100k are all chapter 1 and it's not even finished.Yall should just write an IF, cause with the amount of words I'm seeing 10k words per hour doesn't seem too far fetched
When are we getting the demo gangNo joke, I am writing one lol. It's at about 100k~. That's actually why I do comment about stats and variability so much, since I myself am trying to find a way to make it as variable as possible without making it too long. Can't say I'm succeeding though, since those 100k are all chapter 1 and it's not even finished.
Could've made it easier on myself, but I decided to not only implement a cheat mode where you can max everything at the start, but I am also trying to reflect that in every check. Also maybe making my magic system flexible (Mage the Ascension style) and giving the MC time magic is not really conducive to that.
But I guess that's how it is - you either try to make it as perfect as possible and sit on it for years without releasing or you just wing it like Niki and rewrite a hundred times while farming that sweet validation and patreon bucks.

The prologue with character creation is up on the CoG forum. But it's just that - character creation and some nice prose for introduction.When are we getting the demo gangView attachment 34097
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Does my friend writing one count? Only reason I didn’t. Don’t worry, I’m not biased I will criticize him too… he’s at about 60kish words on just prologue… very ambitious, but he has all the time in the world, plus he created an RO just for me. So yes, if you think my criticism of Niki is bad, you should see what I do to a close IRL friend.Yall should just write an IF, cause with the amount of words I'm seeing 10k words per hour doesn't seem too far fetched
Based. I also have a friend who reads PoMA and critiques my writing from time to time. Funnily enough at least 4 characters are based off of my best friends and this guy in particular became an RO.Does my friend writing one count? Only reason I didn’t. Don’t worry, I’m not biased I will criticize him too… he’s at about 60kish words on just prologue… very ambitious, but he has all the time in the world, plus he created an RO just for me. So yes, if you think my criticism of Niki is bad, you should see what I do to a close IRL friend.
Ohh i Remember this wip its still bookmark on cog for me I'm glad your continuing itThe prologue with character creation is up on the CoG forum. But it's just that - character creation and some nice prose for introduction.
Haven't updated it since I posted it in May. Since then almost finished chapter 1, but tbh I only wrote during the summer cause of uni, work and just general life issues. Slowly getting back into it, but at the moment I think I'll just yolo and post it in March or smth.
Here, if you wanna check it out you are welcome to. But I warn you, it's heavy on words, magic and metaphysics. But combat is definitely part of it.
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The Lightbringer Chronicle: Book One — The Fallen Veil (WIP)
Hello everyone! I’m a new writer currently working on my first game titled The Fallen Veil. I plan to make it a series although I understand that it is something that will be determined at a later point based on interest and how well it goes for me. I have no formal experience in writing and am...forum.choiceofgames.com
Have to say I'm impressed you went and did that. There are few alternatives to POMA now that AC is banned and itch only, so it's good knowing we have other IFs to look out for besides like Dao Ascension lolNo joke, I am writing one lol. It's at about 100k~. That's actually why I do comment about stats and variability so much, since I myself am trying to find a way to make it as variable as possible without making it too long. Can't say I'm succeeding though, since those 100k are all chapter 1 and it's not even finished.
Could've made it easier on myself, but I decided to not only implement a cheat mode where you can max everything at the start, but I am also trying to reflect that in every check. Also maybe making my magic system flexible (Mage the Ascension style) and giving the MC time magic is not really conducive to that.
But I guess that's how it is - you either try to make it as perfect as possible and sit on it for years without releasing or you just wing it like Niki and rewrite a hundred times while farming that sweet validation and patreon bucks.
And then he says it will too easy for mc after leaving pomaView attachment 34088
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Can no diff most of NS only people she can't are folks who are freaks there ,can also win again most of Soul metamorphosisView attachment 34091
And can beat 50 percent of Soul Convergence at CF lol and is easily top 15 CF in the universe all others are also god kids or close to them meaning they all could be neck and neck and older than her too but yeah those top 15 CF doing damage till soul convergence resources really help I guess.
It's excuses gang, he is on record to say CF mc will be above average but will need time to be great ,all these top tier god kids or backed by god's are freaks and then get all the god stuff they are literally perfect rivals for mc but as I said niki just doesn't want to write the story post NS so he just has this excuse on command lol when in truth it feels more like he doesn't like WU fraud.And then he says it will too easy for mc after leaving poma
Does he means to say that mc can beat them as well?
Which is a shame. Aura farming on those godschild or gods' chosen by going all "I am a God." would go incredibly hard. More impactful than doing the same thing against POMA's people who are just frogs stuck in a well who are not even aware of the existence of Gods, and so cannot fully comprehend the gravitas of such a declaration.It's excuses gang, he is on record to say CF mc will be above average but will need time to be great ,all these top tier god kids or backed by god's are freaks and then get all the god stuff they are literally perfect rivals for mc but as I said niki just doesn't want to write the story post NS so he just has this excuse on command lol when in truth it feels more like he doesn't like WU fraud.
The prologue with character creation is up on the CoG forum. But it's just that - character creation and some nice prose for introduction.
Haven't updated it since I posted it in May. Since then almost finished chapter 1, but tbh I only wrote during the summer cause of uni, work and just general life issues. Slowly getting back into it, but at the moment I think I'll just yolo and post it in March or smth.
Here, if you wanna check it out you are welcome to. But I warn you, it's heavy on words, magic and metaphysics. But combat is definitely part of it.
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The Lightbringer Chronicle: Book One — The Fallen Veil (WIP)
Hello everyone! I’m a new writer currently working on my first game titled The Fallen Veil. I plan to make it a series although I understand that it is something that will be determined at a later point based on interest and how well it goes for me. I have no formal experience in writing and am...forum.choiceofgames.com

I remember seeing this a month ago lmao ain't no way dude!The prologue with character creation is up on the CoG forum. But it's just that - character creation and some nice prose for introduction.
Haven't updated it since I posted it in May. Since then almost finished chapter 1, but tbh I only wrote during the summer cause of uni, work and just general life issues. Slowly getting back into it, but at the moment I think I'll just yolo and post it in March or smth.
Here, if you wanna check it out you are welcome to. But I warn you, it's heavy on words, magic and metaphysics. But combat is definitely part of it.
![]()
The Lightbringer Chronicle: Book One — The Fallen Veil (WIP)
Hello everyone! I’m a new writer currently working on my first game titled The Fallen Veil. I plan to make it a series although I understand that it is something that will be determined at a later point based on interest and how well it goes for me. I have no formal experience in writing and am...forum.choiceofgames.com
Can't wait to see what he's cookingDoes my friend writing one count? Only reason I didn’t. Don’t worry, I’m not biased I will criticize him too… he’s at about 60kish words on just prologue… very ambitious, but he has all the time in the world, plus he created an RO just for me. So yes, if you think my criticism of Niki is bad, you should see what I do to a close IRL friend.
Nay you fiendDoes my friend writing one count?
