Stories that left you disappointed for a reason

[seneya]

Beastiality aside, a lot of the added stuff adds nothing to the narrative.

I still don't understand why the dragon needed to be romanceable tbh.

 

[Kim-Tong]

I still don't understand why the dragon needed to be romanceable tbh.

Wait WHAT! The author legitimately added the non-ironic option of having a romance with a reptile? Ah hell nah!

 

[noahh]

I still don't understand why the dragon needed to be romanceable tbh.

tbf dragon-human relationships are a veeeery common romance trope in fantasy, at least i don't find it that weird. but i do think it's unnecessary to go back to add this, just write the plot already

 

[seneya]

tbf dragon-human relationships are a veeeery common romance trope in fantasy

Ones where dragons take human form, sure, but I don't remember dragons going human in BoC.
And yeah, it's an odd thing to do a rewrite for. Did a lot of ppl request this? lol

 

[noahh]

Ones where dragons take human form, sure, but I don't remember dragons going human in BoC.
And yeah, it's an odd thing to do a rewrite for. Did a lot of ppl request this? lol

i think you'd be surprised by how much monsterfuckers like dragons lmaooo I'm sure it was heavily requested.
but yeah i just want a timeskip i can't stand people being so mean to kid Mordred for much longer. need AT LEAST a bratty teenager who can fight back a bit

 

[Harwoof]

i think you'd be surprised by how much monsterfuckers like dragons lmaooo I'm sure it was heavily requested.
but yeah i just want a timeskip i can't stand people being so mean to kid Mordred for much longer. need AT LEAST a bratty teenager who can fight back a bit

Y'all think Boc will be completed? Man I need your optimism I gave up on it a while ago.

 

[Sokrates]

Y'all think Boc will be completed? Man I need your optimism I gave up on it a while ago.

If rewriting again and again ensures more patreons then it will never finish. I can understand when you've got like only a chapter out, and the writer feels it isn't good enough so they rewrite it (bad practixe btw. Wastes too much time), yet rewriting something which was already good with 5 chapters out, is pure desire to prolong the writing process -> get money for longer.

 

[seneya]

If rewriting again and again ensures more patreons then it will never finish. I can understand when you've got like only a chapter out, and the writer feels it isn't good enough so they rewrite it (bad practixe btw. Wastes too much time), yet rewriting something which was already good with 5 chapters out, is pure desire to prolong the writing process -> get money for longer.

Year of our Lord 2035:
"Today, I bring great news! The game is going to undergo another rewrite, so now you'll be able to romance Stablehand #69 and their dog!!! Subscribe now for the sneak peaks of a new and improved chapter 1!"

(sorry not sorry)
(I know there are valid reasons to do rewrites, just fooling around)

This said, whatever happened to Supernatural in New York (the author's other work)?

 

[LosLorento]

This said, whatever happened to Supernatural in New York (the author's other work)?

Indefinite hiatus while they focus on BoC. Their eventual plan is to port it from CS to twine but it'll be a while (if it ever happens). You can probably find the dashingdon ver. in the archive on this site if you want to revisit it though.

 

[yourstalkeroutside]

I still don't understand why the dragon needed to be romanceable tbh.

Honestly, the rewrites with the dragon is like chapter 5 with the brother's fiancé again with the forced attraction. Show how little attention Gawain gets as well.